Made a Short film, Let me know what you think??
Made a Short film, Let me know what you think??
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- evanburke0
Blessed, can I make a suggestion?
Take the opening shot and apply motion-stabilizing to it. If it wasn't so jerky, it would perform far better as an establishing shot, and look a lot smoother (panning backwards, right?). When it first started playing, I thought I was watching some student project or youtube video because it was so jerky. I think if it was stabilized and smoothed, it would help introduce the film better, give a better first impression, then let the gritty shaky-cam kick in.
plus you'd get more of a jarring effect as you edit to the next shot, the tight mid-section shot of the guy running.
Just an idea.