Made a Short film, Let me know what you think??
Made a Short film, Let me know what you think??
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I agree with others, but would go further.
There's no need for a voiceover. It's like an ad or public service announcement. If you can't communicate the idea through the action on screen and editing, then you've failed. Equally no need for text to come up on screen.
The music was no way near tense enough, in fact it was pretty terrible. I turned my speakers off and enjoyed it much more and still got the message.
Some of the shots are good. Some others are less so.Let the action and the editing tell the story and let the music really hit it home. no need for a VO in my opinion