Made a Short film, Let me know what you think??

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    The opening scene was exciting but the explanation of the cause is rather bland.

    Predictable. In story. Disconnect is rather evident. Too much explanation in second half with the first half. It doesn't loop back with the first portion at the end.

    Camera wise, too much dof action. Using dof to cause the feel of hurry or party has too much of a similar tone. Flashback has the same feel to it.

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