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- edd-e0
makes me want to go on vacation... the only thing that bothered me was in the photos, in the youtube video from the link at the bottom, was missing the people.. i see stock images of elpez.. but seems no one goes there, as it was missing the key element of the human being.. other than that i want a vacation but somewhere perhaps wit h people in it..
of the photos with people in it, you see "her ass" as its 1 person shot thru the hotel.. but of her looking outwards to the sea.. this makes me wonder who the target audience is, if its adolescent men or boys or if it that chick we see.. not sure..
or the images used for activities.. like "spanish lessons" and the image is a girl reading a book on a lounge chair.. i dont know what the lesson is with that image as the one standing next to it.. is it self reading what looks more like a girl reading a novel paper back danielle steel love story over learning any spanish..
the "fishing" image of some gun on the front of a boat back view of him sitting with arms stretched back so he could enjoy the sun and view, but doesnt appear to be fishing at all..
the end line "Ask Reception" was too repetitive.. it felt like it was a run lola run that made me think that after reading 3 of these intros to activities that i was on an infinite loop and somehow read the same thing twice.. perhaps move the words around so that things dont become on that repeat b4 the people actually get to the island resort..
in terms of the site, the area below the map/ weather/ trip advisor has too large of a white space that the info below can definitely be brought up higher giving the viewer more to read and absorb before having to scroll down to see the content.. also the drop down of the map/weather/ trip advisor push the content below, further down in the site, so having that white space serves no purpose if the content is going to move below anyways.
i think going over the chosen images and perhaps using other ones that inspire the idea of the content would help sell the idea to go on vacation at elpez..