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  • freshmode0

    Nice... but still needs something.

    Not sure if this makes sense but it is too cold... and not in the good "snow board" cold. The gray to me is a bit played out and in this case looks a bit to boring.

    The typography is all over the place. The date is nice & tight. Then the words "capitol board room" start getting spaced out, then "snowboard shop" get even more spaced out. Not to mention that it looks like you are using Helvetica & arial. Is that the case?

    I would consider using colors that give an icy cold feel. Not a tech cold feel. Make sense? Also, I think we can move past the 640 x 480 space. Or maybe a scalable site that expands. Right now I get worried that my monitor is to large or that my res is to high. Might just be me.

    The photography is ok, I would agree with more themed pics, but they are also a bit much for the "bland" feel of the site.

    The site has potential but then again I am not sure what is going on in the background. Might be a reason why it is so simple.

    Hope that helps and I would like to see it finished. When will this be the case? It seems pretty close now.

    cheers!

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