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    I wrote this poem for her. I posted it on the blog thread about a month ago where I like to share my misery, but they only throw rocks at me there now. When she read the poem, she tells me she cries and I left a tattoo on her.

    I am a blind man
    I don't know from up or down anymore
    I resisted your love
    And now you walk away from me
    Tomorrow is a new day
    But I still can't escape the ghost of you
    I am still blind
    Water won't wash it away
    Thinking of you only brings pain deep in my soul
    But what else can we do?
    You only see me as a fool
    When we are together,
    This blind man only breaks your heart
    A limited and simple person I am
    I am a blind man
    We use to spend our time together
    We use to eat together
    We use to sleep together
    You said I didn't show my love enough.
    I've learned to suppress my emotions since childhood
    But your love has secretly blossomed in the back of my mind
    I am just a ordinary guy
    I'm not the most exciting guy
    I'm not the best looking guy
    But all I can offer is my loyalty and love
    The grass is now greener where you walk
    The sun will shine brighter where you climb
    All I have now is darkness
    But when this blind man looks up at night
    You are still the brightest star I will always see
    I feel defeated
    Blinded by your love

    She replied with:
    This song tells how I really felt about you:

    "In every heart there is a room
    A sanctuary safe and strong
    To heal the wounds from lovers past
    Until a new one comes along

    I spoke to you in cautious tones
    You answered me with no pretense
    And still I feel I said too much
    My silence is my self defense

    And every time I've held a rose
    It seems I only felt the thorns
    And so it goes, and so it goes
    And so will you soon I suppose

    But if my silence made you leave
    Then that would be my worst mistake
    So I will share this room with you
    And you can have this heart to break

    And this is why my eyes are closed
    It's just as well for all I've seen
    And so it goes, and so it goes
    And you're the only one who knows

    So I would choose to be with you
    As if the choice were mine to make
    But you can make decisions too
    And you can have this heart to break

    And so it goes, and so it goes
    And you're the only one who knows"

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    • omg you fucking faggot.Khurram
    • She's a narcissist and you're a big girl's blouse. End of.mikotondria3
    • At least I know love you jackassvitamins
    • to Khurramvitamins
    • and you don't know that the word is "used", in "used to eat..", not use. Relationships are more complicated than this. Fail.mikotondria3
    • this is the most assanine pathetic teenage drivel for flow out of the mouth of a GROWN ASS MANKhurram
    • That's not love, that emphatuation. Love is bad smells and washing up after you've had an argument.mikotondria3
    • get a grip on your fucking emotions. I know it ain't easy, but jesus CHRIST.Khurram
    • Like in the hour or so you took to write that, did you not at ANY point thinks "jesus, this is flowing out of a pitiful well of insecurity"??Khurram
    • I'd expect more balls from Joe Jonas.mikotondria3
    • insecurity"???Khurram
    • i'm not sure what to say about thisbigtrick
    • Well, women love my feminine intuition. Something you'll never understand. Biotchvitamins
    • "Well, women love my feminine intuition. " LMFAO!!!Khurram
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