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• monNom0

  Lovely work, I was admiring your portfolio a few weeks ago.

  I think you've got a bit too much in it now, or maybe the format is working against you. Some of your projects are presented a bit blandly and with too many pieces. The Mountain Madness website for example has too many variations on the same page, and they are all straight on flat images. You'd be better off cropping in on some key features, and editing down the number of images in the stack. Carry this line of thinking through to your other projects.

  If you're interested in integrated work, consider putting that at the top of the page. The Lifewise, First Ascent, Wetsely Richards and SAM projects all really jump out at me. I think the other stuff may even be a bit of a distraction (though it's all quality).

  Love that cartoon of the bears, funny stuff!

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  • great feedback, thanks. funny how the details slip away when you look at stuff too long.UKV

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