Paranoia
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Well, I think you've got a good thing going on - I like the animation, all the elements have come together nicely - will look forward to seeing the next one.Maybe next time you need to spent more time on crafting (& then telling) the story. Remember that yr audience has no idea about the back story.. they only know what you tell them, and they're dependent on you for all clues.
I don't know if you do this already, but I think it's important to storyboard like crazy. You only need really rough sketches most of the time. It can be good to use post-it notes - because you can easily rearrange a sequence and add or remove shots. Ask people to look over your rough storyboards to make sure they understand the flow of the narrative. I reckon it can also be useful to scan in a storyboard and produce a rough animatic with approximate shot timings - that way you can get a sense of how it's working before animating.