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  • luckyorphan0

    Excellent work.

    I'm not sure if this is in the file, but my playback had some hiccups. Perhaps it was on my machine, but the spot seems to 'stick' here and there. Is that intentional? If so, I'd remove it. I felt the need to check my machine to make sure its RAM is not overtaxed.

    Otherwise, I'd agree with mono and gabe. This could be edited way down. But then again, we don't necessarily know the purpose. Perhaps there's a long voice-over that this is being created for. But if not, yeh chop it up.

    Very nice work, tho.

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    • < The 'Battery Low' shot could be cut down by 2/3, for instance.luckyorphan
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