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- lukus_W0
I think the structure needs more work.. at the moment it sounds too linear and too simplistic.
It seems like one new idea (sound) is being introduced individually and regularly. It's very easy to guess when a the music is going to change tack .. could perhaps try to surprise the listener / play with expectations. There's no real build up or energy.. seems quite flat. Ends in pretty much same way it began.
The main baseline is a bit too dull to be repeated from start to end - wouldn't be so difficult to break this up a bit and give it a bit more funk. I definitely think it needs something to break up the monotony.
Other than that - great stuff.
- Thanks for the constructive criticisms. I've given my friend this url but I'll pass all comments on also.EdTheDuck101