Portfolio Update
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- d_rek0
Heirarchy is a bit challenging throughout. Margins feel tight, as if you were pushing pixels to cram in the loads of useless, blog-like info you've included.
Your work has a widely disparate range of quality as well. Some of your print pieces are outright awful. I also seriously doubt that anyone will take the time to read the boat-loads of copy you have regarding each project either. I would narrow it down to maybe 2 paragraphs, max. Also, I sort of expect to see large images AFTER I click the project thumbnail and not have to click into yet another thumb, that opens up a lightbox.
I'll be brutally honest: It looks as if you've got some solid chops but formally it's all a bit lacking. I think if you tightened up the composition overall, refined and pared down what you want to show people the site could be really dynamite. Until then it's all just a bit too much to want to sift through.