British People Needed
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- detritus0
"I know, I'll get the internet to do it for me!"
Zs tend to equal Ss in words like 'organisation'.
We don't use 'municipal' - we have local and county councils, depending upon context (afraid you're going to have to work out which yourself).
ton = tonne (, right?).
'Dumpster' = recycling bins. Aye, it's just 'bins' these days, but as a copywriter, you should probably be sheparding expectation indirectly too.
City of Brighton = Brighton.The overall tone is unmistakably American, I'm afraid,and I'm not about to sit here and do your own work for you by re-writing it all for you. You might want to reign in the overwrought sense of paradigmatic-phase changing incentivised action plan meeting schemas and such - we're a little more dishevelled and Harris Tweed for that kind of over-earnest twattery.
Also, It's really dry, eh?