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Out of context: Reply #9

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  • detritus0

    Home -
    The ball of wool looks a little small, and the shadow at the point the thread leaves the end of "digital" could do with a little more love.

    Client List -
    "We're".
    The second half of that intro sentence doesn't read all that well. As a potential client, I'm not sure I'd understand what "we've worked with as individuals" means, and if I did get it, I'm not sure I'd see it as a positive.

    News -
    "(or online destination as we like to call it)" sounds really twatty, but that's probably just me. Your overall site style and tone tries to be friendly and tech free - then you dish out this bit of gobbledygook?

    Contact Us -
    imho, the phone image could do with filling more of that space to the right, as its partner images do in other sections.
    Why is email not initial-capped, and "Us" is?
    Why are there no brackets around the international code?

    • thank you for that valuable feedback. Will make those changes as soon as possKiko

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