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• d_rek0

  the overall design is solid, if not a little cold.

  The juxtaposition as technology/green company I think is a little too literal - clouds and blue skies, grass and then circuitous overlay on the header image - and creates a rather forced 'green' message for me.

  I think I understand what vsplus is saying about the logotype/corporate typeface not being consistent. Not that is HAS to be consistent, but they should at least harmonize. While I will advocate for DIN any day of the week I think in this case it tends to dominate the heirarchy with it's strong letterforms.

  You're at a good point, I think you just need to address a few details and it'll sing.

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  • Thank you for clarifying my point of view.vsplus

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