Charity Site Crit

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  • detritus0

    I'd consider more contrast/colour and I'd set all examples of script text at the angle evident in your header. Layout feels cluttered - like it's based on a simple square grid, with some bits forced in, in a literal sense, without much regard for how the overall composition feels.

    I don't know what they are, but I'm slightly concerned by the 3 boxes at left, labelled Run, Climb, Sled. I hope they're not nav, but I can't imagine what else they could be.

    More colour. Charity should be warm, human and alive - not bleak and in all likelihood, dead.

    • boxes on the left are for style switcher, so users can pick a themed colourharmsie

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