Website critique

Out of context: Reply #16

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  • kelpie0

    I think you might be trying to do too much with a page which is essentially very simple. I'd go for using the space and simplicity more rather than trying to fill it in with gradients and extra graphic bits. Its looking a little disjointed as a result.

    The second part of the page; have you thought about reworking the 4 big features so that they run in a list, one on top of the other, in teh fisrt 3 columns of the page, and taking the strapline things from the bottom and laying them out in the 4th? - I think it would bring that area more structure, and allow the straplines more prominence

    • your spaceing has to be perfect if you are going to float elements on teh page like thatkelpie

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