public logo critique
public logo critique
Out of context: Reply #4
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- Nairn0
I'm afraid that, on first glance, they're all a little over dense. I certainly wouldn't entertain continuing with the vertical text versions.
If you must branch from one of these - stick with the simplest, no. 1 - but it's still quite clumsy, over-plain and obvious.
I'd probably knock that serif detail off the 8/G composite - just cleaving a chunk out should be enough to distinguish it as a number - but that still leaves the oddly embedded 11.
I dunno, man - I'd do a little more doodling on paper.