Logo Crit Please
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- Nairn0
In zoom mode, in whatever software you're using, zoom out so this is at like 10% Note which details are missing and think about what you need to do to keep it distinct. Version3 meant up there that you should increase the thickness of your white strokes - look at the width of the eye - that'd probably be a good place to start.
The licks are a little flat and a bit too homogenous - get some life and variety in there. Also, your turtle needs a tail, no? :)
I'd consider trying a none-white-stroked turtle shell pattern, just made up of the two shades you've got (which I'd try and contrast a bit more too, incidentally).
Whilst you're playing with this - take out the text. It's probably distracting you from the components of the logo. Always have an idea of the types of text you want to use - but try and make it so both aspects are strong in and of themselves.
I think you're on to a good idea, if you play with it a little more.
Good luck!
- Also - why is your shell/pan in 3d and the turtle in 2d?Nairn