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    Nice work overall. Yeah, I'd clean up that logo on the "Appleton" site too : ) In Print: I'd start out showing the complete pieces at the beginning of each project. Overall your photos could have more tone in the background to separate them from the white background of your site. Print/Rotation: "letting" should be spelled "leading" (coming from the strips of lead put between the lines of type in days of old). And in this same copy block, last sentence, shouldn't the "were" be a "was"? (you may want to proofread your site again). Print/Earthtone: I would reduce the size of the logo approx. %70 (especially since it's a bit rough at the current size). Maybe even stack a black version above with the color below. And your ordering of images, I'd put nr. 3 before nr. 2 so that it follows the nature "left-to-right" nature of reading/viewing. And the last image, I'd definitely show that standing up plus opened up a bit to give it more dimension (seems a little flat right now and also move this to image nr. 1). Print/Shoe Cat: Image nr. 2, I'd take a tighter shot of that (as your did for image nr. 4 which is a nice one!) The logo reads as "Sneaker Head3" to me, but if it's a done deal, it's a done deal : ) I really like your paintings with nr's. 2, 4, 11 & 12 being my faves and your clay work is nice as well. For your CV, I'd make this pop into a new window. That's my .02 cents. Hope this helps and you're not put-off by my honesty. Good luck man!

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