Biz card crit
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- Scotch_Roman0
What Mau said. Your logotype is too large. Kill the eyeballs, they're lame and just plain weird. Get rid of your disciplines list. If you feel that you must include your URL, put it on the logotype side.
This is a business card, not a brochure. Simplify.
On the subject, your logotype needs kerning help. Close up VI a bit, and a little more for UA. Also, if you're going to use something as ubiquitous for the logotype, then modify it in some way to set yourself apart.
Regarding your title, I frankly think that Creative Director is a bit of a stretch for a 23 yr old kid. I seriously doubt you have the experience and knowledge required to pull of the work of a good CD. Nothing personal, I just think it's good practice to accurately depict ones capabilites when it comes to titles.
- *"...something as ubiquitous as Gotham for the logotype..."Scotch_Roman