Biz card crit
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- ********
Made this new design for my business cards. What do you think?
- Amicus0
I'm sorry, but V I S U A A L just looks like a typo to me.
I don't think you need your name and title so large. It makes you look like you are trying to hard. ie. shrink and left align. The extra space will help the card breath a little.
- pango0
i find that there isn't much breathing space on the back of the business card. felt like the placing of the eye balls are forcing you to place the rest of the content in an awkward position.
- phatlee0
What is it, an eye ball!?!?
- Mau0
start over.
sorry.
- eating_tv0
Visuaal? Sounds like a Dutch word gone off and smelly TBH.
I do like the typography - to add a positive note.
- Ruffian0
Less is more. Blablabla.
- itstimefortea0
the mixture of centered and left aligned type on the back is a little awkward. i'd align everything to the left. i also think there's too many eyeballs. maybe just have one good one alongside 'visuaal' and keep the other side blank with just type. then the whole thing would be cleaner. maybe they eyeball could be more subtle too.
- coco_ono0
i remember this....
yeah, come one dude...you're better off with all black and just type
- Nairn0
How old are you, pyramd?
- tank020
start again, this looks very cheap. Have you test printed it to see the size of that type?
- dyspl0
don't like it att all.
imo layout in biz cards : the less the better.
..oh and a "creative director" needing advice for his own card?!
JK
- PonyBoy0
lolz... i'm not showing any of you a damned I do... EVER again.... haha. :D
- dyspl0
some qbners cards
http://www.qbn.com/topics/555572…
- ********0
Brandon, i would remove everything that you do not need, and focus on designing your whitespace (black space in your instance)
also for that Nice and Textured feel consider having it printed on Black Plike 330grammes paper (you local paper pusher will know this) and to make the white Really pop, use a serigraphic printing instead of digital / press.
- ********0
im 23 wtf does my age have to do with it? lol
- gerardm0
design, art direction, development, photography, motion, typography...
i wouldn't list every single thing you have ever dabbled in. sounds like a college portfolio. pick something you focus on most or or keep it generic like... interactive media marketing
this goes back to the less is more comment
- ********0
just lose everything except the name and the contact details.
