Black-Marmalade

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    Couple of things.

    I LOVE the poster for the Vienna Ball. Great work there.

    I would have an a:visited state, as it's more than annoying having to squint my eyes and try to read an almost-white, grey text link to try to find where I was at again.

    The logo definitely needs more treatment. The points where your flourishes meet the arms of the characters looks really shoddy -- the curves look very unnatural. I might also tweak the x-height on a couple of those letters if you're going to be doing that ornamentation on the type -- it makes some of the letters appear taller than they really are.

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