Dare i say... Site crit please...
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- shitehawke0
Im not trying to be a prick, but do you actually want a crit or for us to say it looks nice?
I couldn't view the reel cos my internet is shit at the mo, but I like the 80's disco colours, but I too think the font it too jaggy. If I were to change anything straight away it would be the heirarchy of information. The 'Work' 'About' buttons are considerably smaller than the 'Art Director' bit, yet it would seem to be that these buttons are more important than your title as I tried to click on that first.
If you're going to do an acordian style site I would go at it whole heartedly, if you click on work everything else shoudl minimise, not stay active like when you click on about or contact.
Overall the site is minimal so whatever details you stick on there should be as perfect as humanly possible otherwise, they will stick out and catch your attention like a brain in a jar.
- um, surely i crit was what i asked for? unless i am mistaken it was.BM_BM_BM
- im not mistakenBM_BM_BM
- Well its just when you said 'on my screen it doesnt look too jagged, or not too much that it upsets m, seeing im not reallyshitehawke
- advertising my web desing skills. but i hear ya, and will change it when i can, or when i learn bit oh wee coding'shitehawke
- kind of sounds like it doesn't matter what we say about the site. But again, Im not trying to be a prick about it, eh.shitehawke