Dare i say... Site crit please...

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• Rodimus790

  Sweet demo reel. Nice promo for the touch Pro. I've been using that phone for a couple months now.

  As far as the site, I would try to differentiate the links from the rest of the copy on the page, and give a hint that they're clickable.
  And the about copy needs a little more room to breathe. More space between lines, loosen up the kerning. It's a pretty thin font on a black background, so it isn't the most legible as it is.

  If you're not really adding much beyond the reel, I'd recommend having that in plain view once the page loads, as that's the real highlight of the site anyhow.

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  • Pretty much all your content could be self contained on one page, so the links aren't even necessaryRodimus79

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