new portfolio site
new portfolio site
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Way too much is happening at the same time.
If you dumped the recent work section on the home page for example, the intro section to the left would get all the user´s attention, which would be a good thing for the home page. then you could annihilate the intro part on all the sub-pages, it´s redundant there. I suggest to kill all content that isn´t really necessary (like the 4 things at the bottom). reduce text length, font number, and simplify, simplify, simplify to focus your message. also the marketing speak doesn´t suit you well, like nairn said. keep it real!
Also: for an 18year old you´re really doing an amazing job. be good!