Poster Crit.
Poster Crit.
Out of context: Reply #17
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- dyspl0
to answer your question, about the text, I'd say that you could play more with the definition and the word "new"
Regarding to your definition, I would play with repetition : a font made from dot as you did. the same word again and again, but slightly changing along the differents words and so the last would finally be "NEW".
this is just an idea and there are many others.The general feeling I have is that you first focus on a meaningfull and strong message (as tDR used to do, and I know you like their work ), and then you try to make the whole thing looking nice, and that's where you seem to loose the path.
for me everything should follow the message, that's the aim of this kind of work, and that waht makes it "nice".just my 2cent.