Im in a bind.... any suggestions?

Out of context: Reply #14

  • Started
  • Last post
  • 33 Responses
  • cannonball0

    Suggestion: You need to show food (thats a no brainer) and you need to show living things that are happy in there (dosen't have to be human, but that works too)

    Right now it looks like the West Elm showroom and while that looks nice its a little soulless.

    I would also close in on the shots. You're revealing too much about the space and I feel like I've already explored it.

    • I would also play with the lighting to make it more intimate. Shot #1 kinda does this but #2 blows out and shows you the crawl space and plumbing.cannonball
    • you can see the crawlspace. I soucl take a date to shot #1 maybe but defenately not to shot#2cannonball

View thread