folio copy critique
folio copy critique
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- hawkwah0
1. The kerning, leading and aliasing on the 'logo' images is awful...why jaggy edges if you're using images?
2. I would dump nearly ALL the copy and just have a grid of square images. Use something like lightbox to view a larger version or link to site. This is a single page portfolio that could be scanned really ease if there wasn't all that annoying filler copy.
3. You dont need to say 'welcom to...' I am already in you site...drop it.
4. 'Select list' - why bother...actually this can sound confusing...(I read it as select FROM list and expected a list of links.)
5. The rollover preview doesnt work....and you shouldnt really have to explain how to work a rollover - especially as this site will be aimed at ceatives like yourself (right?)- Cheers for these points.
From the few interviews I've been to, I've asked for folio feedback. Articulating with site descriptions was a main concern for me being interested in Interactive AD roles who is new to the area (an unknown) and they thought having these might help.n0rty1
- Cheers for these points.