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a dash man! an em dash! or en at least of the em is too long for ya.Rollover thumbnails for a preview.
Why would have a period in here?Tequila\Digital Sydney
Bye bye to the Solidus. No visual harmony here ;o) make it a regular slash... no?In the title of your document you have this:
The Level. Design. Interactive. Play
Why no period after the word ‘play’?You are capitalizing every word in the bulleted points at the top.
Why aren't you also capitalizing the firdst letter of the words ‘banner’, ‘advertising’ and ‘animation’? Don't think they are less important than the rest to not deserve capitalization.Under ‘Chandelierium’ you are not capitalizing ‘CSS’ nor ‘XML’, but yet, in another project you are capitalizing ‘CMS’ and the top of your site you have ‘CSS’ and ‘HTML’ capitalized.
- thanks man. for what it is, I think the copy is as tight as it can be with these copy tweaksn0rty1