folio copy critique
folio copy critique
Out of context: Reply #7
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Honestly... up the size in each header. 1 or 2 pixels.
Needs more contrast between small and larger text.What's with the hyphen in the write up for August & Pemberton?
Dashes exist ;o)Again... you are using a hyphen in "Jam Music
The Club Club - Chinese Laundry"
Make that an en or em dash. Whatever looks better for ya.