folio copy critique
folio copy critique
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- ukit0
"The intuitive add to cart navigation will keep you clicking and ordering in no time!"
I think you can be a little less markety and more straightforward. You are presenting your work here, not trying to sell product. Just say what it is, and usually that will do the trick.
- yes it sounds really sales. i got carried away there. thanks maten0rty1