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- jamble0
I really don't like it, the main intro text is just a bit too ragged and oversized. I can see what you're trying to do but I feel that when you click the web/print bit and the folio work scrolls in, it's a bit underwhelming being presented with such small thumbnails of your work when you've set your stall out on the homepage with the giant text.
The work thumbs should bigger and more inviting. Also, as you're using some sort of scrolling, perhaps you could continue loading the pictures in place rather than in a lightbox?
These guys do a good example of a simple, scrolling site. http://www.hotmeteor.com/ and perhaps making a little more of your work wouldn't hurt.
That's my two pence at least, hope it helps!
- i know this is pretty critical feedback, but i appreciate it.benvrazo