(crit) Refreshing Honesty?
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"The original text I proposed isn't actually as negative as it sounds but to explain why I'd have to go into loads of detail about the details of the commission. The point is though: if it sounds negative to anyone reading it who isn't aware of the details of the commission then that would be bad."
heh... mate if there is any way at all that the original text could sound anything but seriously negative I'd be very surprised. Its in the language and choice of words, and the details you choose to point out. it really screams of bitterness, if that's accidental and inaccurate and its just how its coming across due to some circumstance then I'd check the hell out of any of the stuff you're putting up in case its unduly suffering the same fate :-/