(crit) Refreshing Honesty?
Out of context: Reply #26
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- SkyPoo0
Yeah, you're right Ian. After fielding opinions on here I have put the following text....
"I was commissioned to create the factory Headquarters of Sugarush Beat Company and to provide them with various scenes on a journey around the town and within the factory for use on their sleeves and video promos. I created a HQ that was like a catherdral, but made of industrial elements to convey the devotion they have to producing great music. A few scenes shown below. The top image also went on to become the album cover" .
The original text I proposed isn't actually as negative as it sounds but to explain why I'd have to go into loads of detail about the details of the commission. The point is though: if it sounds negative to anyone reading it who isn't aware of the details of the commission then that would be bad.
- Yeah its all about context. Id say if you explained it to clients they'd understand but anyone unfamiliar to it could just...ian
- ... take it as a negative from a 'difficult artiste' and I'd say the music industry has enough of those already.ian
- < Does this one sound better by the way?SkyPoo
- Aye, much better and more professional.ian