flyer crit.
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Out of context: Reply #22
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- Nairn0
I don't know why I'm bothering to respond, but anyway - I quite like the pick and the colour scheme, but feel the text is off - it doesn't in any way say 'acoustic' to me. I'd try it with a similar layout, but a slightly 'traditional' (maybe Goudy-esque?) serif, or something, perhaps even going so far as very subtly texturising the outlines. If you do it smartly enough, heck you might even be able to get away with keeping those back slashes you're so fond of. Think 'modern' layout with an old style feel.
Whatever - draw a box around whatever text you do employ and make sure everything fills into it to line off properly - your stuff never seems finished properly.