design critique
design critique
Out of context: Reply #5
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2nd round no better. Overall, your type on the site is weak.
you have the appearance of 4 faces already, just becoming disparate and extremely poorly rendered. I would advise you to try and find a standard to your typography, something consistent but with flexibility. As you are using a serif face, the possibilities of expansive type families is large. pick something and stick to it, and then focus on the heirarchy through, size, color, composition.