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- anairn0
Something along the lines of 1b - but it still needs a lot of tweak play to get it looking natural. I find some of the swashes a bit heavy - but I don't know whether I'd shrink them down - or plump up the rest of the text to compensate. I'd certainly detach the top swish on the h from the t - or at least make each element more distinct. I'm also not sure whether having it on one baseline is a good call - I kind of expect these things to end up on two or three - and that's not including the subline.
In the subline, the word 'design' seems a bit anorexic, and I've not idea what's going on in 'illustration' but i reads 'ilhstration' or something.
- thanks for the critroyer
- definitely 1b. anairn hits the nail imo. but i would connect the & h t swish. and I read ilhistration********
- yeah. reads very weird. i'll work on itroyer
- I really like 1b, btw. maybe a little tunning is all it needs.********
- On a second thought, maybe anairn is right about the swish. dunno really. maybe a few variations will tell.********