biz card crit plz

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• d_rek0

  Yeah, type treatment feels a little blah.

  Consider composition (yes, even a business card can be composed). How can the negative space better activate the type?

  It seems like you could also get a little more playful with the type family. Try calling out different info in different weights/italics/etc.

  Also, why are you treating the number spaces with underscores? I don't see this type treatment being used anywhere else. The info also feels unimportant to me being set in all lowercase (playing with weights could help this).

  I don't mind the minimalist approach tho. You have a good start you just need to tighten it up a bit.

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  • underscores are to help create space in an all white <div> in < the columnjaylarson
  • not following youd_rek
  • Try using a lowercase 'i' to determine the wordspacingd_rek

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