Site Check pls.

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    nice clean and smooth. but your introduction paragraphs are weak. "This is the online portfolio...."
    What are you introducing? as best I can make out what you are doing and need to do better is explain the way to navigate through the site. You do not need to tell people they are on your site. Why not show how to use the site visually rather than with words?
    This reinforces what you do as a designer at the start.

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