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    The colors are great (almost a split complementary). I"m assuming that you're going to take care of the kerning (U<D in "JUDICIAL," e.g.). The concept is excellent in my view, with the following exceptions: it took me a little while (a bit too long in other words) to realize that those are hands on the scale. I also can't figure out what the child on the left is reaching for. Is that important? Finally, the text is really incongruous. I don't know if you'd want it all serifed, or that display handwritten font – it's just off.

    You're off to a great start, though. It should look fine in B&W too, as far as I can tell.

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