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Really nice work. Really strong commercial portfolio. Good website too. I'm the last person who shoul dbe saying this but I would suggest trimming out one or two projects that are less strong. I guess I'm thinking of your monkey animation mainly. I know why you've put it in there... you are keen to demonstrate that its soemthing you can do, and also its a personal acheivement for you as you have just learned how to do it... but compared to your 'proper' work its a little less polished and lacks any meaning. Its a bit like a "Look! Look What I Did!!!" moment for me, and that detracts from the amazingly accomplished work you have produced.
That's just my two pennys though. My site is packed full of utterly meaningless shite, so I'm really not qualified to criticise you on that point, I just thought I'd let you know how that part felt in relation to the rest as an outsider looking in for the first time.