What do you think?

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  • ave0

    I'm not really a Heavy Metal guy, so I can't really respond in terms of what would appeal to me as your specific target market. I would however say that there seems to be a lack in composition, my eye gives me this intense vertical stretch that doesn't appeal to me, partly due to the line spacing where you list the musicians.

    Consider looking at:

    The overall (flow of) composition.

    The contrast of elements - what should be seen first, the band name, the musicians or the peripheral imagery?

    When I look, I don't know where to look. Nice "feel" to it though. Hope that helps. :)

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