website opinion please
website opinion please
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Not a bad start, but I would zero in on your typography a bit, it's a bit all over the place in terms of visual hierarchy. Check your title choices against the rest of your copy, the size, font, and placement, and try to find some variance in there for the other elements, specifically the size of Mary's name in relation to the "Welcome", and the differences between the content on the yellow and the column to the right. I would pick a different body copy font, and decrease the leading and size a bit, but like I said, good start.