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• jaylarson0

  

  I find the arm on the right could be cropped out, further showing the individual
  isolated. it may create a more melancholic atmosphere for the image and the viewer.

  i would just crop it a bit here to remove the shadow on the right. but not too much.
  

  

  
  one could argue that there is too much dead space in some of your photos, but as a graphic designer, i appreciate the experimental feel.

  i like the use of negative space in your images, so take my critiques with a grain or pinch of salt.

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  • luv the second onejaylarson
  • thanks, I rarely crop anything, somehow feels like cheating when shooting film :)bolus
  • i know what you mean, but if it makes a stronger image, screw the dogme. :Pjaylarson

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