Please Crit.
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- cramdesign0
Colors are nice but... the bands/times are way too loose though the way the poster is, they are designed to be the focal point. Left align with all on an obvious grid. Though it is a minimalist approach, all of the boxes and spaces between boxes and the edge of the flier makes for a lot of edges making it sort of busy but busy with the things that are not important. I sort of like the little bit of chaos you allowed for the title... go with it more. Don't let that part be so safe.
oh well, good luck. Clearly you have the ability to do it. Don't blame the problems on the client though... once you know the obstacles you know the path to success. Use them to your advantage and make it work for you not just be an excuse for not doing your best.
- that thing about obstacles sounds good on paper, but it's not always that easy.epigraph
- truecramdesign
- thank you cramdesign.
rybo