Please Crit.
Please Crit.
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- detritus0
Feels empty, incomplete.
Like the blue void of some future arctic.
- Also, your timetable makes little sense. Where and what is the flapper? (don't answer - I don't care - your punters might)detritus
- i did say details to be confirmed, and the flapper is a well known venue in my cityrybo
- ok then, 'your timetable looks like shit'. Better? re: 'flapper - Never assume anything.detritus
- Sorry, that was uncalled for.detritus
- AAHHHH! YOU FUCKING CUNT!
...sorryepigraph