Site/Logo Crit

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  • gramme0

    Why does the nav jump around? (Mac OS X / Safari version latest.whatever)

    I like the black / gray thing you've got going. The type in general is way too big, especially paragraph text.

    On the logo: I neither love nor hate it. You need to opening the kerning a bit between your customized y and the S in Scape, and open it a little between the P and E. In fact, I would open the tracking (not too much) overall since landscapes, even small ones are generally characterized by openness and space. Your leaf shape arcs a bit too high for my taste. The concept is fine, but I'd rather see the leaf range out further over the word Scapes, as is my eye stops where it curves back on itself.

    • re: Jump Around - could it just be because some pages have a scrollbar, some don't?detritus
    • it jumps horizontally in my browser.gramme
    • yepdbloc
    • looks like it's cause by the srollbarsdbloc

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