I've treated myself to a new web site
I've treated myself to a new web site
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- Spookytim0
I understood, completely, the chummy style of the copywriting, but I felt it was a bit too much like being rushed on my doorstep by an eager cubscout who is really really eager to clean my car mister for charity mister go on let me please please please I'll do it ever so good mister so I will I promise oh gone lets.
I just felt, myself, that as a business tool, that style of copy would be better a bit further in, not slap bang right there when you enter the site before you've had a chance to be impressed by the precise professionalism of the work. I'm not saying I think its wrong, or badly written, I just think its not the best 'first impression' that one could make.