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- skwiotsmith0
Try 'stacking' the fs to give some height to this thing. it feels very flat at the moment. I, unlike kelpie, would not recommend italicizing the fs. Feels too easy...
There's also not a lot of rhythm in this...the strokes on first e, c and t feel truncated and end just 'end'. Finesse those more.
If all else fails, maybe try another typeface.