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- jonatne0
My boss/creative director would go for the first one.
I'd disagree and choose the second one.
I would work with the horizontal divider though. Make it less pixely and even a little wider/taller/bigger.
I would also try to get a bird or part of a bird outside of the blue image and into the white area above (making your coding job harder, i know).
I don't know what color your main content text is, but it needs to be a dark grey or lighter brown, not black or really dark brown. It jumps out too much and takes away from the smoothness of the design.
I think the 'mastheadish' type over the image could use some work. Maybe some size adjustments. If it were mine I would increase both lines and make the top line condensed and taller.
- love all your ideas... especially the "bird flying out of the box" idea... thanks jonatne!leftwave